Infinity in its infancy
……….Can I dream without body or mind, I imagined forms but does that make them mines, spontaneous spontaneity is I, as is my surroundings, imagined forms almost seem autonomous, as my imaginative powers seem to be bottomless, even the light came from thought, it was I who imagined one day this would all be taught, contrary thoughts are a reflex that birthed contradictory forms, off the cuff I imagined a two legged beast standing in huffs with a crown of horns, a balancing act that emanates from my core, I sense it was there before there was a fabric of space to be tore…. From an imagined tiny pinhole of light, even the emptiness it exists in is a creation of my sight, I expanded upon it because it was getting kind of tight. I was there in the beginning, moving amongst the darkness, even before the light.
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A great write of a view from our limited perspective where there are only three dimensions or four if you count time. Nicely done
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I am impressed by the expressions English-speaking people come up with sometimes. “Infinity in its infancy” implies that infinity has just started. We can recall the song “Total eclipse of the heart” by Bonnie Tyler, with the words “Forever is going to start tonight…” Another example in the poem : “Spontaneous spontaneity…”
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I’m glade you enjoyed it, and thanks..
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