On the Wrong Side of Insight

Neville


Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍

On the Wrong Side of Insight

 

I don’t just look and see,

but I watch

and I savour and I learn ..

And then I try

to hoard what I find like

you would

certain golden memories ..

Each strung out

like pretty bunting across

the skyline of

an unfamiliar and all too

brief lifetime ..

As tiny and crisscrossed

as the feintest

of cracks in small glazed

earthenware pots ..

Still here, in my very own

shell I pretend,

while casually wondering

how many more

horizons, sunsets, faces

and views,

shall eventually become

little more than

vague opaque scenes each

etched upon

the tired old retinas of this

nameless and near

forgotten mans faded dreams ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 11th, 2025 10:12
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  • sorenbarrett

    Neville this poem reads to all us old pots as the shards that we will become. But remember that what is discarded on the trash heap of today becomes the archeological find of the future. Not that I have any illusion that anything I write will survive more than today but maybe if it touches one soul it might make some difference. When teaching there was no greater joy than to see a pupil that made it big come back to thank for the inspiration that they said made the difference in their life. So your words have touched many, me included.



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