"it's okay I'll die one day and it will all be over"
I shouldn't
have
to comfort
myself
with the promise
of death...
It's okay my dear
I'll take you in
For your eternal rest
I'll protect you
On your way
to the next life.
But just wait
your time will come
enjoy it before my visit.
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Author:
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A dark read where thoughts of ending things come before enjoying them. I always thought, what if what comes makes this the best of what there is. A sobering poem
Ha, ha! Thank you, I often find myself saying the first line as a way of comfort...
You are most welcome
Dark...and been there! I love the format too! It really conveys the conversation between you and death. Well done on this, all around! Total 🥷 poet move in my opinion! Rock on, my friend. A fave!
Thank you! I've been meaning to get more creative with the format...thank you very much!
You are most welcome, my friend! I am not sure how designing that felt to you...but I find I love the risk taking with format. A little nerve racking when I am not sure it will be pulled off, but that is half the fun! LOL! Again, loved this a lot!
I'm looking forward to your visit !
Hahahaha pretty much!
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