What death would say to me

NinjaGirl


Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I don’t know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!

"it's okay I'll die one day and it will all be over"

I shouldn't

have

to comfort

myself

with the promise

of death...

It's okay my dear

I'll take you in

For your eternal rest

I'll protect you

On your way

to the next life.

But just wait

your time will come

enjoy it before my visit.

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  • sorenbarrett

    A dark read where thoughts of ending things come before enjoying them. I always thought, what if what comes makes this the best of what there is. A sobering poem

    • NinjaGirl

      Ha, ha! Thank you, I often find myself saying the first line as a way of comfort...

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Dark...and been there! I love the format too! It really conveys the conversation between you and death. Well done on this, all around! Total 🥷 poet move in my opinion! Rock on, my friend. A fave!

        • NinjaGirl

          Thank you! I've been meaning to get more creative with the format...thank you very much!

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            You are most welcome, my friend! I am not sure how designing that felt to you...but I find I love the risk taking with format. A little nerve racking when I am not sure it will be pulled off, but that is half the fun! LOL! Again, loved this a lot!

          • Lorenz

            I'm looking forward to your visit !

            • NinjaGirl

              Hahahaha pretty much!



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