A stroll
Conjures up calm companionship
But carefully I measure my step
The walk
Reaching for a hand snatched away
Carefully measuring my step
He strides ahead
I try and catch up
Carefully measuring my step
He falls behind me
My pace slows
Carefully measuring my step
A stroll
A meaning misunderstood
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Author:
Mumiza D’Okta (Pseudonym) (
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Comments1
This poem has deep meaning and is well planned and constructed. The build up is reinforced in the finish that gives it all meaning. Each step one of greater understanding and the repetition of the line gives it power. Loved it a fave
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