Stillness feeds the air
a presence looms among us
it watches above
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Author:
Ethan Mikel St.Amour (
Offline) - Published: November 15th, 2025 00:02
- Category: Haiku
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Stillness feeds the air
a presence looms among us
it watches above
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Comments2
A most interesting haiku and one must ask is it God, aliens, the weather, our own mood, satellites, big brother and the number of possibilities increases the uncertainty and thereby its presence. Nicely done
Just enough to not be too much!
Thought provoking
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