Your thoughts are mirroring you,
But you are a thought that's mirroring Who?
They say that you are the greatest of all.
These icons are made for yourself.
But you, yourself is the icon of Who?
Who is you and who is Who that's greater than you?
You're feeling disturbed by the lost thoughts,
But you are the long lost thought of what's greater than you.
How's the yearning of Who?
Do you have any clue?
Don't you already know?
Your heart is yearning for Who,
Because Who, even though is greater than you,
He’s also you.
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Author:
Florin Dragoș Minculescu (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 16th, 2025 23:28
- Category: Love
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One often asks that question of who and in this poem it becomes a mirror reflecting back to the questioner their own image. Well done
Nice.
Who is not where one is looking but from where is looking, like the eye who is nowhere to be found but from where is looked for.
Thank you, for your comment!
beautifully thought out and written, i like it.
Thank you!
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