Heart Felt

Brian Taylor

After!

 

It struck like a hand I could not see,

clamping hard beneath the ribs—

a sudden winter in the chest, just me

driving out every steady thought.

 

The world shrank to a pin-point breath,

a taut drawn thread so thin

and time slowed, widened, and visions breadth 

became a tunnel of dark unknowing

 

Then sound and vision returned,

release from dark but not relief.

Only the trembling aftermath,

my mind echoing what might have been.

 

I sat in the quiet that followed,

heart knocking like a late visitor,

air returning in hesitant sips.

Even the room seemed changed,

holding its breath with me.

 

  • Author: Brian Taylor (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 17th, 2025 03:44
  • Comment from author about the poem: I was hit by a severe Angima attack this week. Paramedics rushed me to hospital but everything was a blur. This poem is an attempt to express the chaos of a confusing and fearful 10 hours.
  • Category: Reflection
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