her eyes full of tears
tearing my heart into parts
separation song
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Author:
Devender Kumar (
Offline) - Published: November 26th, 2025 02:06
- Category: Haiku
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her eyes full of tears
tearing my heart into parts
separation song
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Comments1
A sad senryu that is most interesting because of the juxtaposition of the word tear and tearing that can lead to multiple meanings. Nicely done
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