Notice of absence from Tristan Robert Lange
🖤🙏 Away for a few days. See you on the other side. In the meantime, Read, Rise, Realize...and write! 🕯️🐦⬛
🖤🙏 Away for a few days. See you on the other side. In the meantime, Read, Rise, Realize...and write! 🕯️🐦⬛
I wrote
Poetry on your walls,
Now they echo in your halls;
You’re just another brick in my stalls.
Merry Marian,
Quite the contrarian,
Screams her shadow obsidian;
You’re just another blank oblivion.
Doggy dog
Howls into shadows—
Blew down those shady bellows—
You’re just another brick in my wall of fellows.
Sappy sours
Mash in the ground.
Happy men piss off the hound.
You’re just the shape of a burial mound.
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Love Pink Floyd and Black Floyd echoes so many memories. Nicely worded with clue after clue. I was looking for a mother reference. A fave my friend
Soren, this is why I value your reads…you meet the poem where it’s humming, catch the ghosts, catch the play. Grateful for you, my friend. And who knows…Black Floyd might be screaming for the second half of a double album. Or more. So much Floyd material to work with. Glad this delivered. You can probably tell I love Pink Floyd too. Brilliant band. Thanks again. 🐕🧱🌹🙏
You are always most welcome it is my pleasure
That's strange, was playing dark side of the moon today. Best album ever.
Takes you down to the depths and brings you up again. Should be used in therapy.
Seems like the stars aligned! Best album indeed! And 💯 it should be! I liken it to a lazy river ride through the dark night of the soul and brings you out on the other end! No other album has ever pulled off what that particular album has. So, I couldn't agree more. Thank you again, Paul!
This poem revolves around the interplay between identity, existence, and the impact of external influences on the self. It presents a somewhat dark, existential perspective on how individuals are shaped by their surroundings and interactions, suggesting a sense of entrapment and conformity. The repeated refrain "You’re just another" emphasizes feelings of insignificance and the struggle for individuality amidst a crowd. The subject matter encompasses themes of creativity, isolation, and the weight of societal expectations.
Dearest Friendship, this is a thoughtful read… you caught the dark hum beneath the play, the identity tug, the “just another” erosion I wove in. You always bring a wider frame to the piece and I appreciate that clarity immensely. Thanks for engaging it with such care. 🐕🧱🌹🙏
What a creation, love pinks version it's one of my all time fave guitar features, yours is truly a chip off the old block in black. Brilliant vibes musical and inspiring. 🌹 🌈
Teddy, I love knowing Floyd sits that close to your heart too. Makes your words hit deeper. I am super glad this delivered! Besides, Pink and Black go so well together, no? 🤣 Much appreciated, dearest friend.. 🐕🧱🌹🙏
❤️
Fantastic. Powerful work.
Thank you so much, Thomas. Much appreciated! 🐕🧱🌹🙏
Fido sings along with me. It drowns out a certain glugging sound from...... ohh, we know him, we've mentioned him millions of times now! lol.
LOL! Thank you Fido! For God's sake...no_______________.....nope can't hear it either!
The pink haze shines through!
It sure does! Yay! Thank you, my friend! Glad it delivered! 🐕🧱🌹🙏
Love the alliteration and rhyme scheme!
Why thank you, dearest 🥷! Much appreciated! 🐕🧱🌹🙏
Of course!
beautiful - and yes the Floyds werr popular here too....
I mean...the mark of a truly great band, right? Universality! Thank you, dearest Safina. Glad it delivered in delivering. Much appreciated. 🐕🧱🌹🙏
yes indeed they were truly great and appreciated worldwide - glad they found the recognition they deserved
Me too!
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