upstairs

PerditaRose

distant pianist

casually kissing keys

with his melodies

 

  • Author: PerditaRose (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 27th, 2025 03:31
  • Comment from author about the poem: for Frank
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 7
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  • sorenbarrett

    I love this senryu that is not only sensuous and seductive but most metaphoric in its nature. Lovely

    • PerditaRose

      Thank you, Soren. I hadn't even heard of a senryu until I read your comment.

      • sorenbarrett

        It's okay I hadn't either until someone on this site cued me in some years ago. You are most welcome

        • PerditaRose

          I'm a little concerned because you didn't comment on my poem today (11/28). Did you miss it? It's called "only half awake". If you purposely didn't comment on it, I'm sorry.



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