wind chimes

arqios



Wind Chimes (2007, 2009)



Small sounds

twinkle in the ear -

soft velvet touch.

Invisible fingers

quietly mingle

on a weathered cheek,

with sullen humid arvo sweat.

Bleating echoes in the wind;

desiccated foliage rustles,

let’s as creaking floorboards

 whisper willowed memories -

childhood's laughter rings;

clarion of tomorrow fades. 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

    much enjoyed

  • sorenbarrett

    It is interesting how the mere sound of something can stimulate feeling unearthed from the past. Some sounds are well fit to evoke images in and of themselves and in this case wind chimes tell of the breeze and their high pitched echoes sound like the wind itself. Well written my friend

    • arqios

      Entrancing and mesmerising even! Thanks Soren πŸ™πŸ•ŠοΈ

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome Cryptic

      • Friendship

        Nicely done

        • arqios

          Thank you, Friendship πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          My friend, this brought back memories of sitting outside on summer evenings listening to sounds drift in from nowhere and everywhere at once. Funny how a simple sound can open a door to years gone by. This captured that feeling wonderfully. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

          • arqios

            Classic feeling and memory! Thanks TittuπŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

          • orchidee

            Good write A.

            • arqios

              Thanks O πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

            • Kevin Hulme

              We can't see the Wind but - we see it's effect on Water , Chimes etc .
              Fine Poem.

              • arqios

                Indeed. And they sing for the wind that caresses them.πŸ™πŸ•ŠοΈ



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