raindrops are falling
running rivulet races
to the window's edge
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Author:
PerditaRose (
Online) - Published: November 30th, 2025 08:31
- Category: Nature
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raindrops are falling
running rivulet races
to the window's edge
Online)
Comments2
A snapshot that transforms into a deep message where it takes on multiple meanings. Sadness equated with cloud tears, a life giving force, a cleansing wash of baptism, the cycle of life, one of the four basic elements all stopped by a window frame. A boundary to transparency, a barrier. A lovely write
Thank you, Soren
You are most welcome
Perfect - I know this and the gratitude which comes of being on the dry observer's side.
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