car ride on a wet day

PerditaRose

raindrops are falling 

running rivulet races

to the window's edge

 

  • Author: PerditaRose (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 30th, 2025 08:31
  • Category: Nature
  • Views: 3
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  • sorenbarrett

    A snapshot that transforms into a deep message where it takes on multiple meanings. Sadness equated with cloud tears, a life giving force, a cleansing wash of baptism, the cycle of life, one of the four basic elements all stopped by a window frame. A boundary to transparency, a barrier. A lovely write



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