It is not merely a vacuum from which light
Has been withdrawn, but a dense, living thing;
A heavy curtain drawn across the sight,
A comfort where the conscience will not sting.
It is the velvet slumber, deep and warm,
That shields the dreamer from the jagged edge,
Preventing the encounter with the storm,
And building peace upon a crumbling ledge.
A carefully constructed sanctuary,
Where inconvenient facts are never known;
The sweetness of a planned hypocrisy,
The solace of a seed that is not sown.
We choose the narrow path within the gloom,
And clutch the quiet lie that settles deep,
Believing silence holds the key to bloom,
And that closed eyes alone can guarantee sleep.
But ignorance is weighted with a cost:
That which is unseen does not cease to be.
The vital hours that are deeply lost,
The fragile state of false immunity.
The shadow that we foster and allow,
Grows heavy, holding back the vital air,
Until the pressure breaks the gilded bough,
And shatters the belief that nothing’s there.
For truth arrives, though slow, with chilling grace,
And tears away the comforting façade,
Revealing the stark outline of the place
Where careful blindness finally betrayed.
And we must choose to turn and face the day,
To shed the ballast of the heavy doubt,
For knowledge hurts, but shows the only way
To step beyond the dark and climb straight out.
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Bravo! This poem expresses deep feelings peeled away from a core of anger. So well expressed in good rhyme as well that seems to hold the very bulging boundaries of rage from bursting forth. A lovely write of emotion contained with mere words. it pulses and lives under the surface. Very nicely done a fave
Bliss is about to be unblissed!
Good write F.
My friend, this is beautifully crafted…the velvet dark, the planned hypocrisy, the truth arriving with “chilling grace.” You traced the whole journey from false shelter to necessary awakening. Stunning work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Ignorance is bliss, or at least for a while.
For some it might be days, others years.
It's the avalanche when the truth does surface, and we've seen this in real life when people walkaway, never to return.
I have read that idiots are often happier people than geniuses, with room between for the rest of us. Nice work.
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