hello.
hello?
Hell.
Oh.
© 2025 Tristan Robert Lange. All rights reserved.
First published on tristanrobertlange.com, December 4, 2025.
Tittu
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Now that got my attention Tristan. Was it good? Hell no it was great.
Rock on, my friend. I am super glad this delivered and very appreciative of your high praise and fave. Thank you always, Soren, for your support! Much appreciated! 🕳️👁️🗨️✨🙏
Most welcome Tristan
Ah, the final journey to stoke the fire.
Mind you, if it gets you out of Christmas shopping, it might be worth the trip.
🤣 In that case...indeed, it might just be worth it! LOL! Thank you Paul. Your time and thoughts are much appreciated! 🕳️👁️🗨️✨🙏
😂OMG I love this, Hell ya you are here.❤️😊❤️
Yay! I've arrived and been received! 🤣 Thank you so much, dearest Friendship, for your support...moral, poetic or otherwise. Always appreciated, my friend! 🕳️👁️🗨️✨🙏
We hear the distant sound of - well, the near sound. We know who it is - we heard a glug! lol.
He's just glugging along like the little [glugger] who could. 😱 Why is that in brackets? Why editing change was made? Don't answer that! 🤣
He's ate all the spinach in the world. Or at least he has tried all the varieties. Are there varieties of spinach? lol.
I'm a sucker for originality 🤣 hallo elow 🌹
🤣 At first, it seemed too simple. Then it seemed too perfect. I went with the latter! LOL! Glad it delivered, my dear friend! 🌹
Someone's still here, ruining the sensible comments, interfering, etc. All we hear is, not Santa's sleigh bells, but an awful glugging sound! heehee. Awful as in 'ghastly', not as in 'awe-full'.
LOL! Yeah...and the green from the sky...yup, even the reindeer are repulsed! Bird's eye view, as it were! I hate to report, one red-nosed reindeer swooned and never recovered. What will Santa do if a storm comes? No worries, kiddies...Ol' Tom over here is.......
Dearest Tristan, this is definitely a great write. 🥂
Thank you, dearest Kiki. I always so thankful you stop by and read and I am very glad the poem delivered, my dear friend. You always extend my welcome to you, as you have to me. Have a great day! 🕳️👁️🗨️✨🙏
Dearest Tristan of course. You are most welcome. 👌🏻
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