Allow me to talk about
The most beautiful woman,
Inside and out,
A diamond that is rarely found.
Ready to spread her love
By making life a living lark
Collecting all the sea shells and stars
All the pebbles that reflect the sun
Healing your forgotten scars.
All her worries hidden in one thought
Adorn and defend your shore
From barbed wires and sharp rocks
Braving the seasons
In the darkest of holes.
The kind of heroine
You will find only in folk songs
In childhood dreams and tales of old.
The strongest woman
The world will ever know
Never leaves anyone alone.
Raises her shield
And fights with the wildest beasts
In her pocket is the win
She never resiles from the battles
She sweeps in.
She encourages and actuates everyone
To follow her lead,
Taking the oath
To never abandon you in the field.
Always combining wisdom and kindness
Surrounding us with her brightness
A light in the dark
The shining candle in the tunnel of bad luck
Holding the answers of the gleamed map
Guiding the way
'Til the sun i shining up.
'Til our struggles have faded in the past.
So, like a rainbow after rain
Delighted,I say
To know her as the hero
Of my darkest days.
For she's the first to call when in distress
I can proudly confess
The best mum in the whole wide world
Endowing us with glee and mirth
With larks that will be heard across the earth.
So,to God l only request
To never take away my forever friend.
But it is only fair
For her beautiful hair
One day to turn a deep grey
And wrinkles to appear on her beautiful face
From the smiles she gave away .
So ,I will be the first to take care
Of the most ravishing woman
We are all lucky enough to share.
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Author:
Neilton (
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Comments2
A beautiful tribute to a wonderful woman (the second line you might want to change the m to a w in moman unless there is a meaning I missed) Very nicely worded it sings out to any listener. Lovely
Thank you so much for your kind words soren and most importantly for pointing that out ! I checked it so many times i don't know how i didn't see it ! Thank you so much again your review is always very important!
You are most welcome. Many are shy to point out typos and I have many that go unnoticed by me until some kind soul lets me know. Never wishing to embarrass many hesitate but I don't see a typo as a criticism.
You are absolutely right! A typo is honestly just something you didn't notice! Thanks again 😊
What an absolutely lovely if not indeed perfect tribute to a much loved Mum .. She reminds me of what my own Mother was like .. Seasonal greetings and best wishes from me to You and yours .. Neville
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