The Faintest Outline

Iris Nazarene

I try to see myself clearly,

but the mirror fogs with doubt,

my mind reshaping every curve,

every line,

into something cruel.

I trace the parts I hate

until they feel permanent,

like scars no one else can see.

People tell me I’m fine,

I’m beautiful,

I’m enough—

but their voices

never reach the places

where my thoughts whisper louder.

  • Author: Iris Nazarene (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 6th, 2025 05:23
  • Comment from author about the poem: Sorry, I haven't written a poem in a hot minute, you guys!! I've been busy with school, but since the second semester is here, I'll make sure to make some more. Hope everyone is doing great, and I appreciate all the love from y'all always.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 21
  • Users favorite of this poem: Vanna, Demar Desu, freyaaa
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  • sorenbarrett

    Self doubt creeps in and remains held within. What others say makes no difference. A sad but all to true write. Well done

    • Iris Nazarene

      Thank you, I appreciate it.

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome

      • Paul Bell

        Repeat after me. I am the greatest.
        The world is your oyster now.
        Divide and conquer.

      • 2781

        Don't listen to the lies, beauty is of the heart. And wisdom changes the face.
        Youth is always attractive, and precious, and easily squandered.
        Fortunately, as age creeps in, we have Wabi Sabi!
        Don't listen to the lies.

        • Iris Nazarene

          Thank you so much, I appreciate it. Love Wabi Sabi!

        • Vanna

          Amazing poem. Honestly very relatable

        • freyaaa

          Very well written and very relatable. Love the imaging — very descriptive and gives an inside look to this feeling. Well done!!

          • Iris Nazarene

            Thank you so much. I appreciate it!!

          • NafisaSB

            self doubt creeps in at the slightest chance it gets - don't let it demotivate you....keep shining bright...and reminding yourself of your inner and outer beauty

            • Iris Nazarene

              Thank you so much. This is so nice!

              • NafisaSB

                you are most welcome. take care.



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