Where might is not always right
And people can exist without fright
Where the poor have at least daily bread
And the under nourished are properly fed
Where plastic is not thrown in lakes and streams
Where people have a chance to fulfil their dreams
Where each man is treated in an equal way
And caste does not hold full sway
Where education is free for one and all
And medication freely available on call
Where progress is made in all the fields
And the hard work quickly results yields
Where jobs are not restricted for a select few
And for necessities in life, there is no queue
Where Nature thrives in all its beauty
And workers properly perform their duty
Where the old are given a place of pride
And they are not taken for a ride
Where transparency in dealings is to be found
And learning starts from the ground
Where new gen has the guts to dare
And people continue to care and share
Should we not strive hand in hand
To create such a UTOPIA for our land?
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safina (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: whether we get to see it or not - let us do our bit to work towards achieving it...
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So well worded this poem presents and proposes a better world that is a long way from being realized, but one can always hope. Well written and a fave
Thank you so much for your constant support and encoragement...glad it resonated with you
Always my pleasure
My dear NafisaSB kudos a thousand times, for your compassion and kindness and your beautiful Poetic pen 💜
Am really touched by the beautiful compliment.. Thank you so much - am glad you liked it..
Safina, you shape a full arc from longing to invitation. Each couplet lifts another corner of the world you want to see…and then you invite us into the work. Thoughtful and inspiring. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
I truly believe each of us has the capacity and capability to make a difference - so we should do our own small bit to achieve whatever we can...
And I agree with you. 💯 😊
thanks - take care...
Far better than just good .. I simply love the message so well threaded throughout .. Oh' and your authors note is perfect too .. Seasons best & wishing you all goof things, Neville
That is so generous of you - thank you for the motivation - inspires me to keep writing
wishing you a beautiful weekend..take care
Utopia is held by the rich, the crumbs for the poor.
When you actually think about it, nothing has changed over thousands of years, and look how far humans have come.
We're a race heading for extinction.
Mind you, it will be great for the rest of the animal kingdom.
you may be accurate in your comments, but I Still hope for a better world with at least some of my dreams realized while I am alive..
Always believe in your dreams.
yes I do, especially those that are positive...
have a good weekend
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