Bad Person

NinjaGirl


Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I don’t know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!

"You're a bad person."

Well I'm really not trying to be

But I keep making mistakes

Why can't I be good enough?

Why can't I always say the right thing?

Why must I disappoint you so?

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  • Demar Desu

    You’re a trying person!

    • NinjaGirl

      Haha thank you!

    • sorenbarrett

      Three damaging questions with one answer. Because you think so. A powerful poem with a most sad implication. Self questioning leads others to question as well. Nicely written

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      You are a beautiful soul, my friend! This poem? Beautiful expression of never feeling enough! But: YOU ARE ENOUGH! ❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹

    • Doggerel Dave

      Too keen to adjust, to fit in. Be you and let them come to...... you!

    • Durdica Porobija

      If people were more sensitive, anyone could conclude that he or she is a 'bad person.' This is a problem of human nature and a very vulnerable topic. A rhetorical question is a figure of thought, so this poem full of rhetorical questions encourages reflection very effectively.



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