What if this seed
Has spiralled
From the four corners of the earth
Through many births
Into it's present location?
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
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- Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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Sounds like a marketing ploy and technology to some processed food. This may apply as a metaphor for many other things as well. Scary thought
That's an interesting take! I wrote it in response to another rhyme on this site, as you can guess by the title.
My friend, this reads like a quiet revelation. The seed becomes a traveler, a survivor, a witness…ending up right where it needs to be. Simple and profound. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Your take on this rhyme is simple and profound, Tristan. You nailed it.
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