Sweet Syrup

Vanna


Notice of absence from Vanna
I come and go. Sometimes I will post everyday for a week and then I won’t post for months.

Sweet Syrup in My Chest

 

I was asked if I was jealous because you spent so much time with her and gave all your attention to her.

I wouldn’t say jealous is the word to describe what I felt. I felt hurt dripping in my chest, slow and constant, like syrup sliding from pancakes.

I felt as though I was left alone in the cold night, to fight on my own.

I felt as though I became a ghost, haunting the lives of those around me. When I walked into a room, I felt as though I was watching someone else go through the motions — like an actor on stage, pretending to be happy, pretending to be perfect, pretending to be whole.

I felt as though I was falling through a black hole with no escape. But then — suddenly — light.

You became my light. The most unexpected person to bring the brightness I so desperately needed, the warmth I so desperately craved.

You unexpectedly made me feel the happiest I have ever been — like sweet syrup dripping in my chest, bringing warmth back into a place I thought would turn cold.

  • Author: Vanna (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 8th, 2025 23:09
  • Comment from author about the poem: This isn’t my best work but it’s a piece about how I feel right now all put into one.
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  • sorenbarrett

    The term sweet syrup is most interesting not only is it sticky and slow moving but sweet in the sense that pain can bee sweet. Well written

    • Vanna

      Thank you

      • sorenbarrett

        You are welcome

      • freyaaa

        I knew you were gonna cook when I suggested syrup 🔥🔥

        • Vanna

          Thank you twin❤️



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