i saw an hedgehog rising from his winter bed
ready for the spring that lies there ahead
roaming round the garden with his tiny feet
looking for a worm this was his favourite treat
in and out the plants underneath the sun
happy as can be having so much fun
with his little spikes standing in the air
all around his body sticking everywhere
he had a lovely face cute as cute can be
with his eyes of blue that brought a smile to me
mother natures child roaming wild and free
something i will treasure in my memory
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You have done it again Jim another nature poem that entrances the reader. Well done cute and fun
hi thought you would lke that one
thanks for always lovely comment
means a lot jim
You are most welcome Jim yes I did
lucky little hedgehog who inspired this poem - a beautiful memory set up in rhyming verse...
i have grandchildren i have done a lot of kids stories
they love them thanks for lovely comment
had a story published by the bbc a while ago
thanks jim
oh wow- if you share it on this site, do let me know
i have written stories and articles too,
plus wrote a play in school on saving animals - but it was quite childish
the animals in the forest had a birthday party
it was rabbits birthday rabbit he was two
squirrel laid the table with lots of things to eat
made a birthday cake rabbits birthday treat
badger got the chairs so they had a seat
spread them round the table spread them nice and neat
the birds sang happy birthday everyone joined in
now the time was ready for the party to begin
there were big balloons hanging in the trees
blowing very gently in the summer breeze
they played lots of games having lots of fun
rabbit he was happy is party had begun
then they all down it was time to eat
time to blow the candles out to make the day complete
rabbit took a breath and blew is candles out
happy birthday rabbit they began to shout
now a year older another birthday gone
he cant wait till next year to have another one
wow - thanks for sharing - it's a beautiful story, well told....sure the grand kids would have enjoyed..
mine are now 12 and 9 so think they are very grown up already...lol
the animals in the forest had a birthday party
it was rabbits birthday rabbit he was two
squirrel laid the table with lots of things to eat
made a birthday cake rabbits birthday treat
badger got the chairs so they had a seat
spread them round the table spread them nice and neat
the birds sang happy birthday everyone joined in
now the time was ready for the party to begin
there were big balloons hanging in the trees
blowing very gently in the summer breeze
they played lots of games having lots of fun
rabbit he was happy is party had begun
then they all down it was time to eat
time to blow the candles out to make the day complete
rabbit took a breath and blew is candles out
happy birthday rabbit they began to shout
now a year older another birthday gone
he cant wait till next year to have another one
i have some more if you would like to see hem let me know
i write children songs for the stories too
gm. thank you so much. you are most welcome... if it's ok with you i can share with my niece's kids who are 2 and 4 respectively...with your name at the bottom as the author 9to prevent them thinking i am the author0
that is such a nice thing to do..May God keep your ink flowing, along with your beautiful thoughts...
hi feel free to use my poems anytime
makes me feel good make my writing worthwhile
i posted a childrens story video i made
and song i wrote to enjoy share
let me know what you think of video jim
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