the
line
you
draw
to
get
to
your
nar-
ra-
tive
is
any-
thing
but
str8.
who
cares,
right?
© 2025 Tristan Robert Lange. All rights reserved.
First published on tristanrobertlange.com, December 11, 2025.
Tittu
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Loved this one my friend. Loved (str8) very creative. And the straight line of words emphasizes it. You are right no one cares if the line is straight or not in a narrative.
Thank you, Soren! I am glad the shape delivered...that was my exact thought as I was writing it. Irony taking shape! LOL! Thanks again, my friend! šš¤š„š
You are most welcome Tristan it is my pleasure
Good write T. Let's draw the line - or a barrier - to stop the glugging one getting in. Ol' Tom or Obi got anything to say?! lol.
Thank you O. Ooh...let's. Let's see here. ^^^^^^^^ glug....damn! Nope. Those are high, but not low enough. | glug |. Damn it...those just trap glugs. We're going to have think this through! š¤£ šš¤š„š
They can't get a word in. Aww! lol.
I liked the image that went with your poem (as well as your poem).
Thank you, my friend. Much appreciated!!! šš¤š„š
Apprentice labyrinth (content though very relatable for me) Keep up the good work!šš
Hahahaha! Yes. A...um...trial run, shall we say? All jokes aside, I do have a labyrinth poem completed, my friend. Coming tomorrow! Hopefully I can get it to format right here, otherwise, I will drop a url to it on a file. It's going to be better to view it on a PC rather than a phone/mobile device too. LOL! Thanks so much, Dave and I am glad you could relate to the content as well. That's always huge for me. Much appreciated!!! šš¤š„š
Excellent work.
Thank you Thomas! Much appreciated, mate! šš¤š„š
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