winterspeak

arqios


I'll let winter speak

in its own slow cadence.
Walk at its pace.
And listen for what it utters—


with unrehearsed patient attention.

 

In this paredโ€‘back season,
your strongest lines
may yet arrive quietly,

asking only that you notice them.

 

 

 

 

 

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  • sorenbarrett

    It speaks with chilling words, sometimes harsh ice cold, grey days, freezing rain with the promise of brighter and warmer days to come. Patience my friend. Well put Cryptic

    • arqios

      Thanks, Soren. Indeed, they can be trying ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

    • Katie B.

      YOOUR WORK STANDS ALONE. I MAY NOT ALWAYS COMPREHEDN IT BUT I ALWAYS HAVE A TRUE APPRECIATION FOR IT, THE LANGUAGE, THE STRUCTURE.

      • arqios

        Thanks, Katie. That means so much to hear๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

      • orchidee

        Good write A. How's that Summer starting there?!

        • arqios

          Just had the solstice and that longest day was 38C through the night! Hellter Swelter ๐Ÿซ ๐Ÿ˜ตโ€๐Ÿ’ซ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

          • orchidee

            Since when was it 38C in the UK?!

          • Friendship

            Well said, my friend. Your poem delves into the themes of nature, introspection, patience, and the creative process. It emphasizes the importance of slowing down and listening to the subtle messages that winterโ€”or by extension, any quiet periodโ€”can offer.

            • arqios

              Smelling the roses that may not be there ๐Ÿฅ€ ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              arqios, this is understated and wise. It trusts silence, trusts time, and trusts the reader to meet it halfway. Nothing here asks to be chasedโ€ฆonly noticed. Beautifully done, my friend! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

              • arqios

                Quite possibly therein to encounter our true selves. Thanks, Tittu๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

                • Tristan Robert Lange

                  Indeed. Most welcome. my friend.

                • Kevin Hulme

                  Nice one. Though I have nothing Good to say about Winter: It is an enjoyable Read.

                  • arqios

                    Yeah, I get that; winter can be such a frigid landlord ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

                  • cellinic

                    Very deep poem with well-founded poetic arguments) best wishes,

                    • arqios

                      Thank you so much dear friend๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ



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