they left silently
regret's bitter company
how could I not see
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Author:
PerditaRose (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Too many things to think about. It's sometimes overwhelming.
- Category: Sad
- Views: 15
- Users favorite of this poem: Friendship
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Comments5
Here in this senryu is the unanswered question of who. This puzzle leaves the reader's mind running and the poem itself remembered. Nicely done
Poingant. Well written
Sometimes when you're too close, you're the last to see.
Sad, but poignant.
Thank you for your very kind comments.
Good write, Perdita.
Thank you, Jerry. It's always good to hear from you. I've taken a step back from the Weekly Challenge. Generally speaking, my skillset is not that developed or sophisticated to tackle the challenges. 🙁
Well said........Life's unanswered questions we all wonder. Believe me, you're not alone.
Friendship, I'm sorry I didn't respond to your kind comments sooner. They were much appreciated. - Perdita
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