I was shocked
that you broke my vase
Even though I gave it over
To you with a hammer.
Indeed
I set you up
With opportunities
to betray me
And was somehow
still shocked when you did so.
-
Author:
NinjaGirl (
Offline) - Published: December 16th, 2025 18:40
- Comment from author about the poem: I really ought/to stop trying/for trust.
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 49
- Users favorite of this poem: Megan Blaney, sorenbarrett, Friendship
Offline)
Comments5
Powerful message. One I need to learn
You and me both... thanks for reading!
A great metaphor in this poem and it has a double meaning as well. Loved it a fave
Thanks!
Most welcome
Wow, NinjaGirl, a powerful poem, well said. The poem "Trying for Trust" explores themes of betrayal, vulnerability, and the complexities of trust in relationships. The poet reflects on their own role in fostering an environment where betrayal could occur, revealing the paradox of being shocked by someone's disloyalty despite having offered them opportunities to cause harm.
Yes, I think it's less of offering them opportunities and more of trusting them enough to let them know my weaknesses.
Great imagery here ni jagirl. Gives the reader.a deeper moment. Great ✍️ for sure.
Thank you!
Where would we be if we didn’t? I feel that pain though!
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.