I saw him, she said
Looking sad, she said
alone and standing
waiting for the train departing
and it's raining
the sky is crashing
every second is counting
and the silence is screaming.
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Author:
fikrioshin (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Sad
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Comments1
It is the starkness combined with the short staccato meter that gives this poem a sense of tension and building angst that makes it great as far as I am concerned and a fave
thank you 😀
Most welcome
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