EIGHT LINES IN

nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

Avenues
Of bitter stone
Roll like tears
Without a home
A haunted dream
With many steps
A portrait
Of memories kept.

Refugees
Of a past
Walk each road
A bitter quest
Room to room
As rubble lay
In torment of
The final day.

Eight lines in
The poet screams
Can the horror
Be so real ?
Hopes now smoke
In rising plumes
Worship the day
For night it looms.

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  • sorenbarrett

    There is despair and regret in this piece. It calls out to prepare for worse. A haunting poem

  • orchidee

    Good write N.

    • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

      thanks as always much appreciated

      • orchidee

        I know a Silent Poem - it has 4,594 lines (maybe) but there's no words to it. How will we know when we've reached the end of it? How can we be sure there's that many lines it?! lol.
        Same as that daft bit of 'silent music' with the title: 4'33".

        • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

          that is a difficult one to answer lol

          • orchidee

            We could always write a Silent Poem if we have writers block. lol.

            • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

              or just pretend we did lol

              • orchidee

                Yes lol. here's the first verse of that poem - all the other verses are the same! 4 lines to a verse here.
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                • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

                  excellent work, mine is roughly the same lol

                  • orchidee

                    Ah good lol.

                    • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

                      we must have copied one another

                      • orchidee

                        Argh! not plagiarism. lol.

                        • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

                          it looks like it



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