on a springtime night
mama stayed till crying stopped
silence follows death
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Author:
PerditaRose (
Online) - Published: December 20th, 2025 05:46
- Comment from author about the poem: Does this haiku need a title?
- Category: Nature
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Comments1
This is a tragic senryu that sends its message in the last line. Darkness falls when eyes shut. Very nicely written
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