Whispering Light

hacklec

listen to the pre-dawn still

invisible birds call

while the hushed valley,

a sleeping dog,

expects the sun

 

collar to the cool breeze

to stray through

the streets dirty fingernails

and feel a silence

pressed to the ground

 

a riderless car passes

while a plane

slips through the clouds

 

the mountains snow glowing

under an ivory tinge

white candles

to flicker until daylight

 

birds crease the air

as steps repeat

and I bob between

the sketched houses

with their utility line masts

inside a breathless marina

 

traces of lights prepare

as the sun billows

and candles thaw

always melting too soon

 

at a moment’s breathing

a leaving

like the crest of waves

slowly dying by shore

 

soft candlelight before sunrise

let’s me hold on to dreams

while holding on to my shadow

  • Author: Chris H (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 21st, 2025 16:59
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    A poem of holding onto ones dream as well as shadow which to me speaks of the future and past. Nicely written

    • hacklec

      Thank you so much!

      • sorenbarrett

        Most welcome

      • rhmn_7

        The light inside of you is casting the shadow behind you, never forget that. Great poem Hacklec!

        • hacklec

          So true! Thank you.



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