When I press
The ejection button
What follows is a sudden
Kind of shudder
In the kidneys
Just happens to be
Where the life force
Is said to be stored
May the force
Be with you
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
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Comments2
Clever and a fun read that I hope that I don't identify with anytime soon. Nicely done
Me too! Temptation....one of the greatest tests we face?
My friend, this is clever and grounded at the same time. The humor lands because it’s anchored in the body, not just the reference. That quiet shudder carries the whole piece, then lets the ending wink without losing its charge. Enjoyed this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Don`t lose that charge! Thanks for dropping by.
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