You can't write it as a poem, it's the furthest thing from art
It’s quiet, not loud. It's exceptionally dark
It's a whisper in your ear, it’s a tug on your heart
It’s being pulled underwater, in the driest of parts.
It’s knowing what to feel but still not feeling it
It’s standing still and yet you're still stuck in it.
It’s needing pain to feel, or smoke to breathe.
It’s not living in a house but signing a lease.
And the worst part is, it isn’t a choice.
It’s a disease with no cure, taking its victims voice
If you’ve been in it then you know you can come out.
But each time it's a little easier to fall back down.
You can pick up a controller and choose to press play
But the second you lose, it's to depression you fall prey.
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Author:
maleigha rene (
Offline) - Published: December 27th, 2025 17:45
- Category: Sad
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Comments1
This is raw, honest, and painfully accurate. The way you describe depression as quiet, consuming, and involuntary really resonates—it captures what so many struggle to articulate. A powerful piece that speaks from lived experience.
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