If she said it's ok,
does that mean its ok?
Even if it upset me,
my words lost meaning.
I don't want to go back
I don't want to be helpless
Don't tell me what to do,
or how to feel,
or how to think,
ill remember it anyway
so get off me.
ok?
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Author:
Vio (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: You make a meaning, and ill have mine
- Category: Sad
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Comments3
Well worded,a very sad poem, the poet seems to grapple with the complexities of consent and emotional turmoil, questioning whether validation from another person can truly negate their own feelings of upset and helplessness.
This sounds like one is being attacked, and assuming a defensive position. Nicely written.
very nicely written : )
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