Faith-Challenged

Mutley Ravishes

Trying to meditate

Is like trying to take

The work of digestion and assimilation

Off the hands

Of the internal organs

 

  • Author: Mutley Ravishes (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 2nd, 2026 20:56
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  • sorenbarrett

    Quite the analogy in this write. Well done

    • Mutley Ravishes

      Thanks, Soren. Many's the time I've tried to take over the digestion and assimilation. Result? Same old same old!

      • sorenbarrett

        Trying to control the autonomic is rather a chore. You are most welcome

      • Vipassana

        you can't try to be. being is not striving. it is surrendering to awareness.

        • Mutley Ravishes

          Yes. That`s what I was hinting at in this rhyme. Thanks for dropping by.

        • NafisaSB

          i agree with you here...happens to me too...

          • Mutley Ravishes

            How many times have I done this?! It feels like one of the great lessons to learn, especially for present day folks!

            • NafisaSB

              agree wholeheartedly once again - wishing you the best



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