Abyss

sunshine777

How can this be on my shoulders?

Was never grown enough to carry these boulders

All these years blind

Born without my mind

Moving forward would be such bliss

So, what holds me in the Abyss?

ALK

Sunshine

 

  • Author: Amanda Klessig (Sunshine) (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 8th, 2026 19:35
  • Comment from author about the poem: For every child born on Earth
  • Category: Surrealist
  • Views: 14
  • Users favorite of this poem: Mutley Ravishes
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  • sorenbarrett

    The weight of life never asked for but the burden of being born. Nicely done

    • sunshine777

      Thank u. With all the war in the world right now it feels all our shoulders are heavy

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome

      • Mutley Ravishes

        Great question!
        What if "God" became (hu) Man
        Knowing "He" would forget "He" was "God"
        Yet "He's" got
        An Imagination
        And Intuition
        Perhaps we're missin'
        Something?!

        • sunshine777

          Perhaps we are.... Hope is tried in the hardest of times. Prayers up 🙏🏻❤️ thank u



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