Before C3MEKNOWS
Knew it D2R2
Slipped down
The gut tube
Until he reached
The center of gravity
Where he met a cadre
Of beliefs
They chimed, "You took your time
We've being doing our best
To mess up your
Life"
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
Offline) - Published: January 9th, 2026 05:51
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Comments2
Coded and cryptic this messages seems pharmacological but well could be metaphorical. Nicely done
Plenty of the metaphorical in this one Soren!
Mutley, what a sly and unsettling poem, my friend. It feels like a descent you don’t notice until you’re already surrounded. The tone lands sharp and knowing. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ I like this title, too...better than Jules Verne's!
I was tempted to use Verne's title!
Ahhh, those beliefs. They put up one hell of a fight.
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