Haiku of my Love
In Seventeen Syllables,
It is quite Imposs...
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Author:
Kevin Hulme (Pseudonym) (
Online) - Published: January 11th, 2026 20:17
- Category: Haiku
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This senryu is quite cleaver not only in its syllables but how the last line leaves an incomplete word that leaves the meaning emphasized as incompletion in expression just as explaining love must remain incomplete. A fave
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Most welcome Kevin
Yes it is. And this poem's structure and restraint convey that perfectly! Well done, Kevin!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
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You are most welcome!
Great!. Takes a Haiku by the throat and tells it a home truth in its own language.
Thanks. Haven't been around lately; Damn device playing up. Technology to drive you Mad.
I know that feeling so very well - to work with this technology I have to keep on my toes, or more likely me fingertips plus anything else I might employ such as whisky......
nice....
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