The Boss Cat said
"When it comes to cleaning
One's coat
Don't
Ignore the evidence of the senses
But when it comes to Imagining
Ignoring
The evidence
While staying in the present tense
Will bring five fishes
And two loaves of bread"
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
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A puzzle and conundrum in poetic form of metaphor. Reality pays better. Nicely done
Ah, reality. Now there's a mystery! Thanks for dropping by.
You are most welcome
That can prove to be an interesting state of affairs.🕊️🙏🏻
To say the least!
Mutley, this is playful and quietly pointed. Practical wisdom, imaginative faith, and a wink toward abundance all fold together without preaching. The poem trusts the reader…and that trust pays off. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Gotta be careful with the "preaching"! Yes, imaginative faith is what I was aiming at. The greatest test of all?!
Hahaha! True! Perhaps!
And we know what you can do with five fishes and two loaves, not forgetting the washing it down with water turned to wine.
Right on the money, Paul!
an interesting question and poem...
Thank you. How about putting it to the test?!
now that would be interesting i suppose...let's see..
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