Hitchhiking to California

gray0328

 

Awful rain thuds like untuned drums,  

my coat clings like regret's shadow.  

Each step sinks in yesterday's questions,  

mud cuffs my boots like failed promises.  

 

"Look, a dreamer hitching in the rain!"  

"Shame, his eyes are already drowning."  

They see the coat, not the soul,  

a gangster stitched from tired fabric.  

 

This road speaks in whispered gulps,  

swallowing hope, spitting out damp resolve.  

"Look at him, a mystery in decay."  

Maybe they're right—I am my own ghost.  

 

I aim for gold light, a westward myth,  

through fogged-up maps and raw feet.  

My heartbeat chants one word: escape,  

as headlights smear like forgiving halos.

  • Author: gray0328 (Online Online)
  • Published: January 16th, 2026 12:06
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    So vivid and fresh despite its soggy nature this poem is raw and flows like rainwater carrying old feelings with it like debris. Well done Gray

    • gray0328

      Thanks my friend

      • sorenbarrett

        Most welcome Gray



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