Notice of absence from Allie561
I’ll be gone for a short while as I’ll be very busy. I hope to be back soon.
I’ll be gone for a short while as I’ll be very busy. I hope to be back soon.
You promised to stay
Abandoned
You promised to hold me
Released
You promised to listen
Brushed aside
You promised to love
Denied
You promised to help me
Ignored
You promised to protect
Neglected
You promised
Lied
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Author:
Cheesencrackers (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 17th, 2026 00:11
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- Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett
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Comments2
I love the juxtaposition of the alternating lines and their polar opposites that lead to the last one in conclusion. Nicely formatted and planned with meaning. A fave
Thank you for the read Soren. I’m glad it resonated with you.
You are most welcome Allie
Heavy heartfelt poem on pain and loss. Nicely presented. Keep writing my friend.
Thank you for your support Katie.
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