The night wore its dark coat
heavy and loose on my shoulders.
I mistook my bravado for bravery,
a bottle my compass, no maps.
The road whispered slow warnings
I ignored like a reckless child.
Rubber met asphalt, a clumsy waltz,
headlights slicing silence into fragments.
And then—soft thud, life interrupted.
Fur crumpled, breath stolen mid-flight.
I stumbled out, whiskey on my tongue,
and found innocence under my wheels.
Grief howls like a wounded dog,
its teeth sharper than morning regret.
I thank the stars for stopping there,
no mother's son beneath my tires.
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This is a fave Gray. Some really great lines here "a bottle my compass, no maps." a poignant message sent in a tense moment of the poem. Sad none the less in the injury of an animal and the question remains will it be enough to effect change. Lovely
Thanks Soren I appreciate your feedback
Always a pleasure
This strikes hard and true—gritty, remorseful, and heartbreakingly human. The imagery hits like a punch you can’t look away from.
Thanks for sharing your feedback brother I always appreciate your thoughts on my work
I was thinking of a nightmare like that today, as I speed along in the rain.
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