If one believed
One`s dreams
Were a given
Would the will
Still be driven?
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
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Clever wording wonderful rhyme and deep thought are three threads woven together to form this poetic fabric a fave
Thanks as always for your review and kind words, Soren. I "aim" most of the rhymes at myself as much as anyone else!
You are most welcome it is a pleasure
Mutley, this hit close for me. I’ve often wondered whether struggle is what gives meaning to movement, or if belief alone could ever be enough. You distilled that tension beautifully. A fave, my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
One guy was saying that pretty much everything is backward in this "dimension." Meaning we believe that we have to struggle to make our dreams a physical reality. But what if the opposite is true? Having said that, maybe we need to experience the struggle to learn some lessons? I wrote in a previous rhyme about Imagination intentionally placing Itself in a position of limitation, forgetting who It is and what It can do!
Yes. What if? Perhaps both things can true at the same time. A paradox...but that doesn't eliminate the possibility. The things late night musings are made of, my friend.
Excellent.
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