The other day,
As Boa was slithering
Along the narrow way
He came across an exhausted
Monkey with a silk scarf in its hands
Trying to sand
Down a mountain
"What are you up to?"
Asked Boa
"I`m changing the world!"
Replied the monkey
"You dumbass," thought Boa secretly
"Here`s an opportunity
To put him out of his misery
I`ll give him a squeeze, and feed
Myself too!"
Later on, Boa carried on
The way and came across
A man sitting on a rock
Nonchalantly polishing a sword
With its blade pointed toward
His own center of gravity
"It must be Manjushri!"
Thought Boa
"What are you up to?"
Asked Boa
"I`m changing my world, fella!"
Replied Manjushri
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Mutley Ravishes (
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And the fooler becomes the fooled nicely done
Boa was as wise as a serpent when he came across monkey, and gentle as a dove when he came across Manjushri. I feel another rhyme coming on! Thanks for dropping by.
You are most welcome
Your poem explores the contrasting perspectives on change and self-improvement, as embodied by the Boa, the monkey, and Manjushri. While the monkey's futile attempt to "change the world" highlights an absurdity in his efforts, Manjushri's approach of changing his own world suggests a more introspective and personal journey toward transformation.
You nailed it! Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
This made me smile first…then sit with it, Mutley. There’s a sly wisdom here that unfolds softly, letting the humor carry something much sharper underneath. It’s deceptively light, and that’s part of its power. Really love this one! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
That's what I was aiming for! Glad it hit the mark.
You did!
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