Spinning Top

Paul Bell

Panther calling Kestrel-- over

No response

Panther calling Kestrel-- over

No response

Panther calling Kestrel, time is critical--over

No response

Kestrel calling Panther, break in comms, big spinning top is taking us into  wintertime, you are among friends, sending new coordinates-- over

No response

Kestrel calling Panther--over

No response

Panther this is Kestrel, need immediate sit rep-- over

 Panther- 19 confirmed, 4 casualties, 4 walking-- over

Kestrel to Panther, go silent--over.  (Fuck)

Kestrel calling Panther, change to arranged frequency

They were friendlies, need to put this down to a bad day at the office, it happens, passing upstairs to Hats. wait out

Kestrel calling Panther

Panther-- over

Status has now changed, this is no longer a friendly country,

Repeat this is no longer a friendly country, previous sit rep reads, 27 confirmed. Is this correct-- over

Panther………. correct……… over

Ok Panther- suggest immediate sabbatical, big bus is waiting.

Kestrel to Panther-out.

  • Author: Paul Bell (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 23rd, 2026 06:10
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Friendship

    Well written. Paul, our world has changed. Your poem presents a dialogue between two operatives, Panther and Kestrel, who are in a high-stakes situation. The use of military communication language highlights the tension and urgency of their circumstances, as they navigate the chaos and uncertainty of a combat zone.



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