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The pretty girl behind the counter is smiling
as I hand over the items-- a T-shirt,
a pair of shoes. She is joking with me
as all good cashiers do.

'I've always loved Indian movies', she says.
I resist rolling my eyes and nod anyway.
'Pakistan', I correct her without meaning to
and she looks away.
She folds the shirt, slides it in the paper
bag and hands it over.
She nods, dismissing me but

I step behind the counter, becoming
a girl with blonde hair, blue eyes
a tight cap trapping my curls.

I imagine what she thinks,
her imagination taking off, flying,
soaring in the sky.

Myself a looming presence,
great and tall
standing in her way.

A tower
in which her imagination will
crash,
crippling us
both.

  • Author: PennedAI (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 23rd, 2026 13:13
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  • sorenbarrett

    A wonderful poem of a simple incident developing into imagination that blends into an imagination of another imagination. Level within level. Very nicely done.



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