Every second
I look into your eyes
I get a tear in
And a lump in my throat
Will we last forever?
Or drift away?
Will running into your arms
Feel the same?
On the 25th the universe shall align
Will tht make u closer
To being mine?
-
Author:
Edgar_NiyaPoe (
Offline) - Published: January 24th, 2026 10:12
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 29
- Users favorite of this poem: Friendship, RSM0812
Offline)
Comments4
Nicely done. Your poem revolves around themes of longing, vulnerability, and the desire for permanence in a relationship, while also contemplating the unknowns that lie ahead.
A clever use of physical distance to equate to emotional distance. Nicely worked
Beautifully sad and the title is smart
Maybe love is stronger when the planets align. Love is a powerful thing. Unfortunately the pesimist would say nothing lasts forever.
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.