Gimme Shelters

Mutley Ravishes

Got a base

Deeper than Lake

Baikal

It`s 2040 times better

Than anything surface dwellers

Can imagine

However

It ain`t got nothing

On Eden

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  • sorenbarrett

    You got me on this one with the reference to 2040 I must have missed it in the depths of the lake. Fun read

    • Mutley Ravishes

      Rabbit holes and sky dragons! Thanks for dropping by.

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome

      • Friendship

        🤔OK, you got me! On this!

        • Mutley Ravishes

          Was Mother Shipton
          On it
          Or was she
          A lunatic?!

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          My friend, this resonates. The idea that no amount of advancement or hidden depth can rival something lost but pure…that tension feels deeply human. It’s understated, but it lands with real weight, my friend. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

          • Mutley Ravishes

            That`s an interesting way to have read it, Tristan. Thanks for showing me another perspective. There `s another number rhyme in the pipeline!

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              Most welcome, my friend!



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