Stepping out of this dome
Out in the open air I breathe
O stars! The place is cold,
And the bridges are broken and fragile
But I will try my best
To walk further than where I've lingered.
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As I interpret this work it speaks of linger within ourselves and once outside we may find it cold and dangerous but we do our best finding more progress that if we stay safe inside. Lovely
This carries the courage of leaving shelter without knowing what comes next.
Fragile ground, steady resolve—the kind of hope that walks anyway.
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