It was fun while it lasted—
a fever-bright spark,
gone before the ash cooled.
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ROSHI (Pseudonym) (
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It was fun while it lasted—
a fever-bright spark,
gone before the ash cooled.
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How brief is the sensation be it joy, excitement, passion any activity. Here and gone, even fear and panic might be the same. A lovely write so brief itself. It was fun while it lasted.
Being sick is no fun. glad your better.
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