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Hello everyone, I will be unable to post anything as my younger cousin broke my computer.
Hello everyone, I will be unable to post anything as my younger cousin broke my computer.
We have all done it before, drawing circles around ants
crushing a line of ants to watch them scatter in fear
finding enjoyment in torture
thoughtless and without mercy
but what if that is all we are to the universe?
it toys with us, thinks nothing of it
but it does the same as us
just hunting the ants of their world.
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Creator of Mystery (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I feel as though our world is but an ant hill, some shall crush it, others break the lines to watch the scatter, they make a maze, they crush us, all things that we do ourselves, the fear of us is the same as the fear of ants, running from death.
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Hi, this is my first poem, please give me some feedback :).
An interesting thought, why would we think that a power greater than us would have values better than ours.
i do feel like a tortured ant, sometimes, but i'd like to imagine the universe is kind. which is probably very foolish 🙂
great concept, thanks for sharing!
Its not foolish, though the world may be cruel, it sometimes is not. We must have balance, without darkness, you would see no light.
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hi! its a really good poem btw!! keep going!! its aria from school btw
YIPPEEDODAH
actually the universe is trying to help you, guide you to letting the ants be and not be a part of this fear-based society we live in. it is difficult to get out of one's own way--we are very conditioned to crush the ants. sorry to go on so long. I do like your poem.
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