The stars I count in the sky,
only making it for us to view.
A special sight,
just waiting to shine,
I show you each,
one after another.
Mine and yours,
a special sight.
I take the stars in the sky,
just for others to walk by.
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Author:
atticus_made (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 29th, 2026 04:43
- Comment from author about the poem: I just wanted to do something inspired by a topic I enjoy,, stars and romance, so I thought they would maybe make an accpetable poem
- Category: Love
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Comments1
I always found it interesting that people want to name stars after themselves and there were even sites that sold that privilege. A great poem of possession even in love.
Me too! I think it's rather interesting that people want to buy things that they would never even use, nobody has the rights to a star, no matter if given allowance by anybody. And I think it's the same for love, nobody gets to buy that right.
Thank you for always reading through my poems!
You are welcome and right and no one has the right to receive more than that
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